Wednesday 14 August 2019

Tuia 250 inquiry began in Room 2: They used this image and removed the background. They then added their own  background and wrote favourite places they have been or places they would like to go. Check their BLOGS!

Writing in Room 2

Environmental Writing - using calendar pictures:

Room 2 have been using a scene from nature to write an Environmental Poem. First they identified the NOUNS and described them using ADJECTIVES. They then used VERBS to describe an action for their nouns and then described their verbs using ADVERBS.

See Teacher's example below:

Focus: To use adjectives and adverbs to describe a scene.

Determiners
Adjectives
Nouns
Verbs
Adverbs
Prepositional phrase
The
Wooly, white

Golden cloaked

Green and gold

Regimental

Snow topped
Sheep

Trees

Hills

Fences

Mountains
Eat

Stand

Nestle

Guard

tower
Hungrily

Like soldiers

Silently

Posessively

majestically
the fresh green grass

Against the backdrop of mountains

Behind the  lushgreen paddocks
As the sheep graze

Overlooking the life below


Wooly white sheep graze hungrily on the fresh green grass
Golden cloaked trees stand like soldiers against the towering backdrop
Green and gold hills nestle silently beyond the lush paddocks
Regimental fences guard possesively as the sheep wander
Snow-topped mountains stand majestically beneath the deep blue sky!


Check out Room 2's Blogs to see the students writing!